Reuben A

Wow...all I can say is...WOW!!

Firstly, I don't think you need action this early in the story.'Vines climbed the walls adding to its beauty, and candles flickered in the windows, giving it an enchanting effect.' ...

THNX!

Working on it!!:smt024

Meanwhile Will was fairing much better. Within minutes he had loved his choice to leave Molly to go the other way. Soon after starting to walk, he saw a small ...

I agree with Fellow. It's Perfect... Again.

To the person above, it doesn't have to rhyme with anything, its his style. I think the poem worked the way it was written.

Quite frankly, I can't find anything to change in this poem. It's perfect! This time its you who earned a gold star from me.:wink:

I recomend that before you read this, read Melosica-Prologue, and Chapter 1,2 and part one of chapter 3. A cool breeze stirred the long black grass. Only a few years ...

Firstly how does Charlotte feel throughout this piece? Isn't she scared when the...people carry her away from where she is staying? 'The person who is presumably Alice...' 'The woman, presumably ...

Thanks, glad you liked it!!

Thanks!!!

I would suggest reading the Prologue and Chapter 1&2 before you read this. “What do you think is in there?” Millie asked Alan. She was eager to know what it ...

I'll try to decribe more...gold star...YAY!!! :P :P :P

'Felon was a small village in the middle of New.k a large continent. Even though Felon is surrounded by other cities and towns Felon was almost completely isolated from the ...